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[Hi-Tech Incursion]

fairly good

this is fairly good. yes it is somewhat matrix-...y? i have a request. can you make a High-tech Factory/warehouse theme. It should be just as ambient, though more lively. PM if want storyline details.

CN

[Forgotten Woods]

yo!

you do some great RPG work. mind if i use your stuff for a game i'm making on Gamemaker? OH, and if you could, can you try to do a dispair theme, you know, the tipical "big last boss decided to play with you early on, Pwn you, and your about to die" type of theme. that would be greatly appreciated. and love your great pofile pic. go eternal.

KooriGraywolf responds:

you can go ahead and use any of my music, as long as you don't steal the credit for the music :D

Sure, I'll definitely consider your request, although I don't promise you to have it ready soon... I'll contact you later for more details on your request!

[-:YRX:- MMZ2 PowerfullRemix]

epic.

if it was a little stronger and less of an ambient tune, i so would have used it in my screwd up mmz4 sequel anim.

YouriX responds:

Dang it! Lost my chance :P
Ow well, better luck next time?

[Esperanto MMZ4 V1]

hey.

you do epic redo's. but plese do more. i'm making a sprite anim that takes place after MMZ4. i got bored with the idea and decided to screw around with it, thoughit follows my original intantions. Oh! did i mention the 2 zeros (MMZ and MMX) fight each other?

[Epic Trials and Tribulations 2]

epic.

it's hard to find good clasical authors that like this style. if you ever need a storie to write a piece to. pm me with the details and i'll see what i can do.

["Flying Away" - F-777]

belongs

in apple seed

["New Song"]

here is the story i think can go

behind this piece, plus suggestions. it will go 0:00-0:00 story;suggestions.

0:00-0:28 the main character gets back up from defeat, as the music gets heroic, in their time of despair; an addition could be a dispair like theme to build into the begining

0:29-0:41 the hero starts the "epic speach" that you hear in anime when they get epic. his hair and loose clothing start to rise at 0:39;nothing, it's all good.

0:42-0:54 the speach continues, with a slight aura circleing at his feet, pulsing larger and larger, with the DBZ "hair flaping in the wind", the pulsing stops at 0:51 and the aura startsexpanding, loking like its going to blow at
0:52 ; could be a liitle longer with a little more buildup, but it's all good.

0:55-1:20 the finishing of the speech and full blown aura encircling and intertwining our "hero", with the rest of the fighting stopped and everyone paying attention to him; it's great, though could be more heroic.

1:21-1:30 the aura grows, he lifts his head and opens his eyes, to them now being gold with the Dragon slit (|, a downward one.) and at the end lifts arms in a cross above his head; nothing

1:31-1:32 throws arms down, aura bursting out and instantly disipating, going into a crouched start dash like position, dashing forwards to the guy who PwNed him at the crash; could be a second or 2 longer

1:33-1:44 duck-dodges an attack and starts to pulverise the shit out of him, uppercutting the enemy at the start of the build-up; nothing to date

1:44-1:45 is anime slowmo, of the hero leaping to reach him, smashing him to the ground a half second before the crash, with little miss enemy hitting the ground causing an anime ground hitting explosion at the crash: perfectly timed

1:46 hero crashes down, hitting the enemy and pulverising him

1:47-1:55 no sign of anyone, only smoke.

1:56-2:04 a shadowed figure appears in the smoke, walking towards everyone else, the enemies leave, and everyone else holds their breath.

2:05-2:13 that sick figure shadow gets darker and gains a distinct outline of someone; impresevely done

2:14-end the figur breaks through the smoke, it's the battered hero, everyone is happy and amazed, and the leader of the team sits there while the rest go to help their "savior" and thinks, ' all this time we've been serching for the weilder of "that" power, when he's been under our noses the whole time, and to think he summond that much power with no prior use or knowledge, his potential is Frightening' ; i saved this for the end, though i think the title of this piece can be Discovery. and PM me if you want to here more of the plotline behind this story.

Rukkus responds:

Lmao. Dude, thank you very much for the awsome story. I've never had someone do this before, and its so epic. Much appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed the song.

["Rebirth" (WIP)]

good so far.

if i had to say anything, it would be good if you put a more "epic fight" themeline later in the song. just like the hero hase revived, then pwns the **** out of the enemies.

["Above The Limit"]

greatly done

you've done a great job on this. If your looking for ideas, i can give you storylines that you can put music to. PM if intrested, and it would be nice if you included what kind of line you want, fight scene, a death type, ect.

[Turbulance reason4edit]

great job.

i think the edit is better. Oh, and i think your the artist i've been looking for. i have a little scene that needs a piece of music put to it, and have been searching for a style that would suit it. then i fond you. PM me if your interested>