Very well done(at least by my NG standards.) I noticed a few minor things, but then again going for a 3D style with a 2D look is quite difficult. Even so that, on top of the lack of some sort of ending got you a 4.5 here. I'd appreciate an ending, even if we don't actually see the cum. Mabee just her stoping and reacting in a way to suggest said ending would appease alot of people, and help expand your name(unless of course you took this from somewhere, But I doubt that, as I am active in this genre of the internet and haven't come across it yet. So props for the well done work.)